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    rtx_zero84

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    Speechless

    Post by rtx_zero84 on Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:00 am

    There's something going on in Zoar...

    Nobody can really explain it. The things that are happening are horrible. I sit here in a jail cell with a camera that I stole from the head unit, documenting whats going on here. I know I don't have a chance. I'll be going for 25 to life if they don't consider the death sentence. There's this priest. He's the one doing it. he comes to me every night with pictures, stories...trophies. He tells me what he's going to do next. He gets into my head and I can't take it. I have to tell someone. So here's an attempt of a condemned man getting his story out. I didn't do it, I'm innocent. Something's happening here and I'm calling out to anyone that cares. I can't be helped now though... So, if you're listening... Please, please tell someone. Because I can't, I'm speechless


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    Re: Speechless

    Post by Sold Out on Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:04 am

    Looking forward to a finished version, the premise is a good start. ^^

    Didn't have any ideas in the chat and still don't really have any here, but, eh...


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    rtx_zero84

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    Re: Speechless

    Post by rtx_zero84 on Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:08 am

    Yeah, I might develop some chapters for it. I'm not too sure if I can depict it well enough. I mean...it's just an idea.

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    Re: Speechless

    Post by rtx_zero84 on Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:15 am

    I talked to my dude, says he likes whats he sees. He's gonna pop in now and then to see whats going on. Steal my stuff and I'll have people after you :D Help and support would be appreciated. I need all the ideas I can handle right now. Flood my inbox, spam post this thing all day long. Keep it clean and help me do this. I'll totally put you in the credits :DDDD
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    Re: Speechless

    Post by Xin on Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:02 pm

    Is this a book you're writing?

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    Re: Speechless

    Post by rtx_zero84 on Mon Jun 27, 2011 3:29 am

    Not sure yet. There's a few things I could do with it.
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    Re: Speechless

    Post by Xin on Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:28 am

    I like it though. At first I actually thought you were talking til' I saw Soldeh's comment. I thought it was you because you said you only had a phone and then I saw your pic (btw is that you in your pic?) but then i thought you were exaggerating because that doesn't look like a jail xD

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    Re: Speechless

    Post by rtx_zero84 on Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:04 am

    Yeah, thats my bathroom. I was about to go see my girl. Had to dress up. And Psy just so happen to mention pictures. But yes, I like the story too. Trying to develop ideas and write some chapters. (We could see a video soon)
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    Re: Speechless

    Post by Xin on Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:06 pm

    Aight Cool.

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