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    Post by NKDZ Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:13 am

    Name: Strafe 'Dante' Kayoz (Formaly Xavier Kayoz but I scratched that)
    Age: 17
    Personality: Tsundere, Calm, Analytical
    Special traits: Can't swim, comically freaks out when he's in water, which is also his weakness.
    Blood Type: X (Hell yeah)
    Ability: Gravity
    Weapons: Behemoth and Leviathan [Twin Pistols]
    Vehicle: Cerberus [Motorcycle]
    Job: Assassin
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    Back Story:
    The shimmering stars flooded the pitch black skies. The clouds slowly drifted past the the moon, which floated in the air like a gaping hole. The stench of death lingered in the air. A boy laid there on the floor in a sea of blood, all alone, or was he? Of course he wasn't. He was surrounded by a mountain of corpses, cold, breathless, dead. A man approached him and loaded his gun. He lifted his arm and pointed the gun at the boy. He knew that the people were slaughtered by someone, but who? The boy looked at his bloodstained hands and stared back at the man. It was obvious that the damage was all done by the boy. All the man needed to do was grip the trigger, and it was done. Yet, he couldn't. He hesitated as the bloodshot eyes stared back at him, curled up on the ground. The eyes of the demon glared at him, as though staring straight at his soul. Those eyes...He has seen them before...Somewhere...He felt like the boy had a further purpose in life...At that moment, he knew he was staring straight at the eyes of an true Assassin. The boy, out of sheer exhaustion, fainted. The man holstered his gun and picked the boy up and slowly returned home.
    Five years later, the boy, now named Strafe, was a capable assassin. At only the age of 9, he had mastered 6 different types of martial arts and had discovered how to control his..."ability". He ability allowed him to break through walls, yet, it allowed him to float in the air, weightlessly, what was his ability? The ability to manipulate Gravity. A fearsome power it certainly was, if he loses control, another accident like the one that happened when he was 4, could happen all again. Nero, the man that found him, raised him like his own son. He taught Strafe all he knew about being an assassin. Together, they went on assassination missions. Soon, they had made themselves infamous with the name of The Devilish Duo.
    On one very occasion, Strafe's 57th mission to be exact, a terrible event occurred. The plan that Nero had come up with failed terribly, he was spotted and gunned down by the enemy, no matter how strong Strafe was, he was outnumbered 100:1. Nero's last gifts to Strafe were his two most prized pistols, Behemoth and Leviathan. Although greatly outnumbered, Strafe's anger overpowered all 100 men who came at him. He swatted them like flies and crushed them like ants, until nothing but the sound of flowing blood could be heard. Once again, Strafe was all on his own... This time, he had the skills to survive on his own, he was deeply grateful to his 'adoptive' parent.
    Within the next few years, Strafe, now living by the name 'Dante', became one of the most infamous assassins and gained the title 'Reaper's Apprentice'. Although having such a title, he is often underestimated due to his small build, which in turn, often gets him targeted by his own employer, to his annoyance. Which is the reason why he doesn't trust anyone.

    Story:
    In Fortuna, a city floating above the abyss, man has his back to the wall. He is paralyzed in fear. Cold sweat drips from his forehead and onto the floor. His mouth is wide open, yet he's speechless. Eyes staring in fear at the masked demon he stands before.
    "P-Pl-Please d-don't kill me! I'll d-do anything you w-want! If it's money y-you're after, you can have it! Here! Take all of i-it! Please d-don't ki-kill me!"
    The demon gazed at the man with his fiery eyes. He slowly walked towards the man and whispers in his ear
    "I live to kill and kill to live."
    "W-wait! D-dont! I'll d-"
    A loud bang reverberated to the skies. The man squealed no more. The demon got onto his motorcycle and drove off. Leaving the lifeless corpse sleeping in the alley.

    He stopped by a building, looked around, and proceeded into it. As soon as he entered, all eyes fell upon him. He ignored the crowd and went into the lift.

    As soon as the elevator doors opened, he could see a man sitting behind a desk. He walked forward and the man said
    "Has he been taken care of?"
    "Affirmative" As he replied, he put the human heart that he held in his hands on the desk.
    "Haha! Well good job Dante! You have done well!"
    "My reward?"
    "About that... Boys!"
    As the man spoke, 5 men appeared from behind Dante, each wielding guns.
    "Let's just say you won't be leaving this room...Alive that is..."
    Dante look around the room, into each and every man's eyes. He smiled and said
    "Thanks for the reward"
    He leaped into the air and drew two pistols.
    "Kill him now!" The man exclaimed.
    The 5 men desperately fired at Dante. It was raining bullet shells. Nothing could be seen but bright flashes. With the odds 5 to 1, they thought that this battle were to their favour. As soon as Dante landed on the ground, all 5 men collapsed.
    "Reinforcements! Get the reinforcements!" The man shrieked in fear.
    More and more armed men flooded into the room.
    "I'm sorry, you're to generous, but I can't accept any more rewards." Dante said with a grin on his face.
    As he said that he leaped out through the windows.
    "Chase him! I want his head on my table! Don't let him escape!" The man shouted with anger.

    As Dante fell from the 40th floor, he stared into the open sky, with wind scraping past his face. All seemed so calm within this chaotic situation. Gradually, his fall began to slow down, as if, defying gravity. He landed on his two feet and walked to his motorcycle. Soon, he could hear the revving of engines and the shouts of men exclaiming "Don't let him escape!" He started up his bike and sped off into the road. As he was racing through the streets he could see 2 cars slowly catching up. He could have easily destroyed both of them but he was more in the mood for a chase. Speeding up and making sudden turns, he had hoped to shake them off but with no success. Suddenly, an idea sprung into his head and he smirked with joy. He accelerated straight through the road, without making a single turn. Soon, the men chasing him in the cars realized what he was up to.
    "Is he that fearless or is he just a freaking psychopath!" One man said as Dante was about to speed off the floating city.
    He leaped off the city still on his bike and plummeted down into the unknown. While falling, he stuck his hand into one of his pockets and pulled out a round device. It was glowing bright blue and had a button on it. It was given to him by someone close to him, who said to use it when the time feels right, and destiny would take it from there. He pressed the button and threw the device below and there was a bright flash. Dante looked down to see a portal. He knew nothing about where or what it would lead to, but he was always looking for an adventure. He plunged through the portal and a bright white light flashed before his eyes.

    Before he knew it, he was on solid ground. There was sprawling green grass everywhere, much in contrast to the industrialized city of Fortuna. Out in the distance he could barely make out something. It was a small house or a tavern. Either way, Dante got back on his motorcycle and drove towards it.







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    Post by Guest Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:24 am

    BOOM BOOM BOOM char complete xD
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    Post by Castle Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:36 am

    AWESOME o:

    I still can't thank you enough for the work you did for mine. xD
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    Post by Guest Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:55 am

    Castleman29 wrote:AWESOME o:

    I still can't thank you enough for the work you did for mine. xD

    Sold/ Ranger: Relocate this to "Caste, the Jester Noodle of Doom" 's F_RPG File.
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    Post by Castle Sat Apr 16, 2011 6:02 am

    I was complimenting his, "AWESOME o:"
    Then thanking him again for mine.
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    Post by NKDZ Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:44 pm

    *Added two twin pistols, Behemoth and Leviathan, which forms the Devilish Duo, and if they are with Cerberus [Motorcycle], they form the Demonic Trio.
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    Post by Gloria of Greenguard Wed Apr 20, 2011 5:48 am

    Ummmm. I am kinda behind on these things. When I think of behemoth and leviathan I tend to think of a dinosaur and some sort of terrifying water creature. What devils have these names (from a game? Movie? Book perhaps?).

    They look cool. Well done.
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    Post by NKDZ Wed Apr 20, 2011 6:13 am

    Lol thanks ^^

    Well basically, in Norse Mythology, Leviathan and Behemoth were guardians of the Sea and Land respectively.

    In other shizz, I remember Leviathan being one of the Princes of Hell and is also the gatekeeper of Hell. I wasn't sure about Behemoth but I can safely say that it was a large, land-roaming, beast.
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    Post by Gloria of Greenguard Wed Apr 20, 2011 6:22 am

    You can look for them in the book of Job. Even if you aren't the religious type (I don't know if you are or aren't). It is still probably the oldest reference out there. Probably fairly ez to find on google.
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    Post by NKDZ Wed Apr 20, 2011 6:27 am

    Lol I'd search that up sometime when I feel like reading (I rarely do)

    I'm not religious but I do have those epic moments when you think that there really is someone up there.
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    Post by NKDZ Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:11 am

    *Added story to tavern. I gathered that instead of making it manga style, I would draw out certain events which are crucial to the story.
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    Post by Sold Out Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:11 am

    I would do that too, if I had the talent.

    Also, past tense for writing stories, mah man.


    ... Readin' it now.
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    Post by NKDZ Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:53 pm

    I've never been much of a person who does well with tenses. In all my English essays my teacher always writes "TENSES". Sometimes I start off with present, then it becomes past-present, then past perfect, then just straight out past. Pheer teh 3v0lv1ng +3Nz3s.

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