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    Pipoca's profile: Exogenesis

    pipoca77
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    Post by pipoca77 Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:52 am

    so i finally found the profile i amde for my character and here it is

    ATENTION I CHANGED THE ROLE ON MMO CONTENT

    -F.A. user name: Pipoca77

    -Name in the MMO:Exogenesis (more like a code name)

    -Role wished to be played: i start as a relinquished kid with no family,friends or anybody to help me, i start as adam kid and and i end as a professional rogue mercenary(some1 who's payed to kill other people i guess)

    -Personality Traits: Silent,wise, some1 not so social.

    -Role in MMO: Exogenesis was born on a poor family. Also my parents used to not treat me so well and also didnt accept me as his children. Once upon a day when i were 10 years old i desobey them and i got sick of the way my family treated me so i ran away. I didnt know where else to go i thought i was going to die there.I was sitting in a tree thinking crying untill i got amubushed by 3 hooded strangers with huge daggers. Then one of them speaked that i was too weak and stuff...And they started to emssing me , using their mental skills to mess me...i was taken to a dark and obscure place and was glowing eyes evry where and i heard a thousand voices saying "do u want power"? and ii cried a little bit and said "yes..." then i was requested for a contract.

    As i was still in that mental dimension 2 souless bodies that was looking alike my parents appeared and 2 shinning dagger appeared in my hands. And then a demonic voice said: "If u stab these souless bodies with thesedaggers means u will accept this contract and these daggers will be SOUL BOUNDED ONLY TO YOU."

    The Contract: If i stabbed those bodies with the daggers i was going to be accepting a assassination training and the another price was paying half of my life living and to make it grow again i would have to kill 10000 people. But not normal people. People that other people will pay u to kill and the people i want you to kill.

    So then i asked:
    "who are you...?"
    Soul:
    "I am the soul of the Blades of the Wind and i demand u to stab these bodies!"
    Exogenesis:
    -Smiles-"Graaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh! -stabs the dummies-

    In the darkness a mask appeared with thorns on the hidden side and i putted it on and the masked was then sould bounded on me, my whole flace was bleeding... it was painful.

    Here i learned all the assassination tatics and psychical powers.

    Then i was returned to the place where i was at bleeding all the way on my face and with the mask on and the daggers on my face i screamed:

    "Get out of here...Get OUTTA HERE!!!! and i killed those assassins..."

    Then i was crying and stuff and i walked and walked and found a town... (THE TOWN THAT ALL OUR CHARACTERS WILL PROBABLY BE IN)

    And since that untill the rpesent days, i've been detecting all the hating feelings and was able to know who evryone wanted to die so i let , scrolls about a deal i make by saying the amount of gold i wanted to kill the desired person(s) and tell them to throw the cold at a secret lake near the town and job would be done and after some1 do that they also had to pay something, They would loose all of the living time i could see they was going to have equalled to half of the killed person's age but if it was a kid, it would be priceless and u would have a bad fate... in hell.

    hope u like it tell me ur opinions

    or things u think it should be changed to look better

    NKDZ
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    Post by NKDZ Tue Apr 26, 2011 8:11 am

    Well, a Grammar Nazi's hell, but still good story ^^
    pipoca77
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    Post by pipoca77 Tue Apr 26, 2011 8:28 am

    i am nazi <.<
    Xin
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    Post by Xin Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:32 pm

    Nice char though
    pipoca77
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    Post by pipoca77 Wed Apr 27, 2011 2:37 am

    thx sorry for the violent story btw..
    Xin
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    Post by Xin Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:45 pm

    Melikez violence :3
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    Post by pipoca77 Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:48 pm

    o.o'' -steps away from mez-
    Castle
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    Post by Castle Wed Apr 27, 2011 3:58 pm

    No mention of the tavern we all meet up in? O:
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    Post by Xin Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:44 am

    Wow you guys are way too off topic I'm pretty sure those spam-posts are gonna be deleted.
    Castle
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    Post by Castle Thu Apr 28, 2011 8:24 am

    They won't be. Ranger loves me to much. c:

    But seriously Pip, your story is good, but it didn't involve the almighty tavern we all are supposed to meet up at in the end. :c
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    Post by Ranger 50 Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:04 pm

    I do indeed love you, Castle <3333, but I value the importance of keeping the forum as clean as possible enough to do what I had to do.

    Castle
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    Post by Castle Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:14 pm

    :c... Well at least you do love me. <3333 I understand.
    But yeah, Pip you kind of broke the line of stories. They threaded together to make something that made some sense.
    pipoca77
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    Post by pipoca77 Mon May 09, 2011 8:05 am

    look wut ever this character sux ass
    Castle
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    Post by Castle Mon May 09, 2011 8:06 am

    He's a win. :l
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    Post by pipoca77 Mon May 09, 2011 8:08 am

    no its a draw v.v between my toilet and my flurkalinfranklinrockpoop
    Castle
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    Post by Castle Mon May 09, 2011 8:19 am

    Well, all I can say is remake it! Bigger, and better!
    Xin
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    Post by Xin Mon May 09, 2011 11:47 am

    Make sure you meet at the tavern.
    Castle
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    Post by Castle Mon May 09, 2011 12:00 pm

    Yes.. don't forget that.

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