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    Castle

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 1476
    Age: 16
    Location: My Throne

    Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Castle on Thu Apr 14, 2011 9:02 pm

    FallenArmy Username: Leaves of Autumn

    Name: Castle Not fitting for a demonic guardian. So it just seems right.
    Role wished to be played: Guardian of the gate, between my world.. and yours.
    Personality: Neutral, not evil. Hooded, mysterious.. Evil effect, but neutral intentions.
    Suggested/Requested MMO Character's Visualization:

    No weapon, my hands are good enough.

    A Good Song Intro For My Character:

    Final Story: Castle once sat in his throne, tiring of his duty as the Guardian of the Gate. The cursed gate that he guarded wasn't created by him, but the Gods that gave him his powers, and abilities. The gate drains life, Castles life would be drained from him if he weren't immortal. Instead of his life, it's his abilities that were drained. Of all his powers, all he kept was the ability to make, destroy, and lock portals. Though angering the highest powers in the world wasn't his wisest choice in the beginning, it did pay off with him gaining respect in the world of demons.

    The demons screamed and clawed at the gate slits, begging for freedom in the background didn't help his annoyance. He always ignored them, but for the first time, they got louder, and louder until he cracked. He stood with rage, and destroyed the gateway, letting them out, to freely attack the humans, and their world. Just because he was tired of his job, and wanted to be free from his own prison. He grinned at the power he just unleashed, as it is barely a fraction of what his own powers are. He once was able to, see the future, although his future seeing was blurry, it still came in handy. After he gazed into the future, his vision of current time reality is blurred temporarily. (A matter of a few moments) He is also able to open, close, destroy, or lock a gateway, or portal to any location in the world(s). As he unleashed these demons on the world, he opens a portal to the nearest mountain and walks through appearing there instantly.
    (He uses the portals as quick transportation.)
    As he sat on the mountain top watching his destruction unfold, he see's a small tavern with the oddest group of 'Mortals' he's ever seen. One, a witch with black wings. Another, a man in a suit with a cane that stared off into the distance. This man has a lot of sorrow within him and he could see it. Then inside he seen a woman working tirelessly to serve. Being that he's not a Mortal, and they all seem unusual for mortals, he hopes he can blend in with them for as to not cause any direct problems with him. He merely wanted a vacation. As were his prisoners he himself was bound to that gate. So, he had to destroy it to get away. He plans to, after resting and restoring his full power, (As listed above) he'll right his wrong.

    So, he made his way down the mountain at a slow, but steady pace to arrive at the tavern just at sunset. Once there he received some odd stares, but got a warm welcome at the same time. Obviously they don't judge appearances or he would've been pointed on his way. He walked in and accepts a cup of tea, sat next to the fire, and relaxed for once. Thinking about the terror on the world he just unleashed within hours ago, and after all of that he was sipping hot tea next to a cozy fire, thinking of how he might fix the problems he caused once his power is regained. Possibly a mass portal to suck any other worldly beings besides himself back to the underworld. Who knows? For now, he was getting the vacation he wanted. It may have seemed selfish to put the world in ruins for a break from his simple job. But, the gate slowly sucks the life out of you. Being an immortal, it just caused him more and more pain as the days grew longer, and longer. He had a good personal reason to do what was done, if anyone else agreed he would be surprised.


    Last edited by Castle on Wed Jan 11, 2012 3:27 am; edited 49 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixed some typos/redid some stuff to clean it up. It's 1am atm, and I'm oddly tired. :l Will do more later.)

    NKDZ

    Squad: A.S.S Artist Supreme Squad
    Posts: 346
    Age: 14
    Location: Asia

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by NKDZ on Fri Apr 15, 2011 4:39 pm

    I was bored and I thought your character description was cool ._.

    so



    I made a mistake on the daggers as I forgot they were for stabbing =O cuz I drew em to look kinda like smiley faces/ macaronis so they look more like they are used for slashing instead of stabbin.

    PS the thing on the top right is the boot as I could'nt draw the legs so I just drew the boot on top. For some reason, it seems as though the forum size has shrunk and it's partially 99% obscured.

    Castle

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 1476
    Age: 16
    Location: My Throne

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Castle on Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:26 pm

    I APPROVE! I LOVE THAT!

    It's PERFECT! Especially the face I like the half and half!

    NKDZ.. You're the best man.


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    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Guest on Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:27 pm

    Lol bleach's Hollow mask xDD Caslte may not have traced that but guess who did? x)

    Gloria of Greenguard

    Squad: The GoG Squad
    Posts: 787
    Age: 18
    Location: Washington State. USA

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Gloria of Greenguard on Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:47 pm

    O.o Hey castle.....have you ever seen hunter x hunter?


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    Gloria of Greenguard

    Squad: The GoG Squad
    Posts: 787
    Age: 18
    Location: Washington State. USA

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Gloria of Greenguard on Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:47 pm

    O.o Hey castle.....have you ever seen hunter x hunter?


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    Don't worry. I'm not the only one in here who will call you an idiot. ^^ -Sold Out
    im not a spammer there r people with more posts than me :P -pipoca77
    OMG I think I'm subconsciously protecting myself from potential failure as in every single picture I draw, no feet O_O. -NKDZ
    I want a Noodle Squad. -Castleman29
    8888th post? Daaam did anyone get it? Crap I missed it D:<
    Ah well, at least I get the 8901st post (:
    -Xinwarrior:
    girls are just stupid that way -GoG

    Xin

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 2226
    Age: 15
    Location: In a pineapple under the Sea

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Xin on Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:56 am

    ROFL WIN! NK!!! u gotta make mine now...
    hmmm any ideas of wut mine should be?

    Castle

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 1476
    Age: 16
    Location: My Throne

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Castle on Sat Apr 16, 2011 1:11 am

    Nope, Gloria.. o:

    I did.. kind of Sayor. xD


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    Gloria of Greenguard

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    Age: 18
    Location: Washington State. USA

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Gloria of Greenguard on Sat Apr 16, 2011 1:14 am

    If you are ever bored feel free to do mine.


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    Don't worry. I'm not the only one in here who will call you an idiot. ^^ -Sold Out
    im not a spammer there r people with more posts than me :P -pipoca77
    OMG I think I'm subconsciously protecting myself from potential failure as in every single picture I draw, no feet O_O. -NKDZ
    I want a Noodle Squad. -Castleman29
    8888th post? Daaam did anyone get it? Crap I missed it D:<
    Ah well, at least I get the 8901st post (:
    -Xinwarrior:
    girls are just stupid that way -GoG

    Castle

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 1476
    Age: 16
    Location: My Throne

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Castle on Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:35 pm

    Uhh.. hope you like the story. o:

    NKDZ, Sayor said it was your job to read my story? I.. don't get why.. but.. yeah.. Enjoy? :3


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    Gloria of Greenguard

    Squad: The GoG Squad
    Posts: 787
    Age: 18
    Location: Washington State. USA

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Gloria of Greenguard on Sun Apr 17, 2011 10:42 pm

    May I ask the specific reason the mother killed herself? Was it cause her grief over someone killing the father?


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    Don't worry. I'm not the only one in here who will call you an idiot. ^^ -Sold Out
    im not a spammer there r people with more posts than me :P -pipoca77
    OMG I think I'm subconsciously protecting myself from potential failure as in every single picture I draw, no feet O_O. -NKDZ
    I want a Noodle Squad. -Castleman29
    8888th post? Daaam did anyone get it? Crap I missed it D:<
    Ah well, at least I get the 8901st post (:
    -Xinwarrior:
    girls are just stupid that way -GoG

    Castle

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 1476
    Age: 16
    Location: My Throne

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Castle on Sun Apr 17, 2011 11:08 pm

    Yessum. She was deeply depressed being without a job, a widow, and a mother of a newborn.


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    Ranger 50

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    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Ranger 50 on Sun Apr 17, 2011 11:55 pm

    I like the first one, somehow it seems to blend in better with the other stories. They're both pretty good though, and I like the way you embedded the other characters into your storyline.

    Castle

    Squad: Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts: 1476
    Age: 16
    Location: My Throne

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Castle on Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:37 am

    Ah, well thank you Ranger I thought you would.


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    Xin

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    Age: 15
    Location: In a pineapple under the Sea

    Re: Castle The Guardian of the gate between our worlds.

    Post by Xin on Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:29 am

    Yea I like the first one too 8D

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