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    It's a poem.... God, is it really that hard to see?

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    Post by Avocado lad Wed Apr 06, 2011 5:34 am

    Today I made a girl cry
    I will never forget, It made me wonder
    and wonder did I
    About the reasoning that I had
    To make this girl feel so bad
    To actually bring her to tears
    After all those glorious years
    I had spent being, repeatedly beaten
    I tried to go against those ways
    And spend every of my days
    Being the kindest nicest person I can
    But now those dreams are gone
    I wonder where I went so wrong
    As far as to send this girl to tears
    I try to make amends I do
    But only until they get to her, through,
    I will live in the darkest dark.
    Never to leave always alone,
    No one forgives, into emptiness I’m thrown.
    A vow of silence for now, I’ll think I’ll try
    Until I’m forgiven or until I die.


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    Post by pipoca77 Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:06 am

    what?
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    Post by Avocado lad Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:09 am

    It's the poetic interpretation of an experience that happened some 40 minutes ago, well it's closer to an hour I'd think actually.
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    Post by pipoca77 Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:10 am

    oooh.... wat?
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    Post by Sold Out Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:18 am

    This is a partial reason why I have trouble believing Pipoca mastered Paint SAI.

    Anyway. I thought you were past your break-up phase, avo?
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    Post by Avocado lad Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:32 am

    This is not break-up phase shit Sold.... This happened like an hour ago.... I made a girl cry...
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    Post by Avocado lad Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:33 am

    And besides I wasn't mean to the girl who broke up with me anyways.
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    Post by pipoca77 Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:42 am

    aah calm down i was just kiding :P
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    Post by Sold Out Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:44 am

    Sheesh. This world left me with a heart of ice. ^^

    Can't say much about the writing style, too.
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    Post by pipoca77 Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:45 am

    writing style? <.<
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    Post by Xin Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:39 am

    I read the first two lines and all I have to say is




    You hurt a girl?

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