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    Avocado lad

    Posts : 464
    Age : 22
    Location : In the united states, which is on Earth, which is in Canada.

    My last Poem

    Post by Avocado lad on Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:41 am

    Although my eyes have never seen even you
    Although our skin has never even touched
    And eventually in your hands
    Your very hands my pounding heart you clutched

    Closer to you I’ve never had been before
    When the day was done and I was home
    On the computer and through the bans
    You made me smile when I was all alone

    You’ve changed, turned and broken my true heart
    And now I lay here, cracked and broken apart

    ~Avocado Lad

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by FlamingCrosS on Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:56 am

    Awww man this is soo sad.... ;(
    I wonder who this girl is...
    And whom she is with now..

    Poor Lad,, Hope you find someone better and will not break your heart again ;)

    (PEACE)
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    Fiana

    Posts : 179
    Age : 29

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by Fiana on Mon Feb 14, 2011 6:35 am

    Its beautiful Avo, though it makes me sad too...

    The same as Flames, I hope you will someone to stay with you.

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by FlamingCrosS on Mon Feb 14, 2011 6:47 am

    Btw...
    Fiana hows your valentines with your bf? or with your family?

    I hope it was good .... ;))
    Happy Valentines ;)

    (PEACE)
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    Fiana

    Posts : 179
    Age : 29

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by Fiana on Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:52 am

    Im single lol

    But if I had I hope that too :)

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by FlamingCrosS on Mon Feb 14, 2011 12:32 pm

    Oh ! your single !
    Lol!

    Well like lad ... hope you find someone kind and will respect you as you are ;))
    And will love you !

    OMG! I'm being affected to much by this thread

    Oh well lets enjoy hearts day with full of love ! O.o (I did it again)

    (PEACE)
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    Avocado lad

    Posts : 464
    Age : 22
    Location : In the united states, which is on Earth, which is in Canada.

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by Avocado lad on Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:07 pm

    o.o Lol, well I'm not looking for any more internet relationships... Unless I find the right one, the perfect one ^_^
    Then I'm staying with them.

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by FlamingCrosS on Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:32 pm

    thats great to hear lad! ..
    so now pls get over with the past and start the new day with a smile..

    breath in and enjoy every single second and I'm hoping that you'll find the right one for you soon ;))

    (PEACE)
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    LumosPriori

    Squad : Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts : 75
    Location : Paris.....Hilton's bed.

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by LumosPriori on Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:29 pm

    Oh man. I just love poetry and this...this is awesome-sauce B3
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    PsychoxLetter

    Posts : 220
    Location : narnia ffs

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by PsychoxLetter on Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:13 pm

    Oh, this is very sad. But wellwritten.
    But makes me feel guilty too. ;__;
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    Xin

    Squad : Apocalyptic Noodles
    Posts : 2247
    Age : 20
    Location : In a pineapple under the Sea

    Re: My last Poem

    Post by Xin on Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:53 am

    IKR! This is so sad...and old :P

    Anyways, good job Avo :D Stay single <3

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