by NKDZ Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:07 am
Oops sorry, because usually people do old THEN new because it shows the wondrous effects of transformation ya know? But then again since your title is "new/old" it would make sense to put your new one first but yeah~ You know, misconceptions are misconceptions xD
Right then, now to the critique. Your colouring and tone are really good as far as I can tell but you need more detail on the hair to make it look more like hair. Another thing is the fact that the right arm mysteriously turns invisible halfway through. If you don't feel like completing it or maybe don't know how to continue, it's best to just crop off the whole side rather than leave the decapitated arm there. The head looks a touch too big compared to the shoulders as the head should be half the chest give or take. You also need to add a few minor details that can change the whole (well I guess...) look of the picture such as the bone collar and such. Other than that, as I said, it's a massive improvement :D