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    Post by PsychoxLetter Fri Sep 23, 2011 10:03 am

    More of this kinda stuff. ouob
    I'm redrawing old pictures in an attempt to redeem my dignity <3

    newest version;
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    23 september '11 - 1 hour, 55 minutes.

    old picture;
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    10 january '11 - 1 hour, 10 minutes


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    Post by Xin Fri Sep 23, 2011 12:24 pm

    I like the eye shadow :D
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Fri Sep 23, 2011 12:27 pm

    XinWarrior wrote:I like the eye shadow :D

    Hah, on the original one? x)
    You shouldn't, quite frankly it's sh*t. /:
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    Post by Xin Fri Sep 23, 2011 12:30 pm

    No, on the second one.
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Fri Sep 23, 2011 12:31 pm

    It doesn't have any eyeshadow. o-o
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    Post by Xin Sat Sep 24, 2011 6:37 pm

    Wut's all that black stuff around the eye?
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    Post by Sold Out Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:26 pm

    Nah, you are both talking about the same picture already. Love your work, Riri.
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:47 am

    XinWarrior wrote:Wut's all that black stuff around the eye?

    Yeah, that black stuff's on the original. You just said it wasn't the original. The one that isn't the original has no makeup. <_<
    Thanks sold <3
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    Post by NKDZ Sun Sep 25, 2011 2:36 am

    Wait...If it isn't eye shadow did someone punch her i the face e_O Haha xD Just joking :P It's pretty good other than the proportion of the face. Here's a tip, the width between both eyes is the length of the eye itself :D
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:00 am

    Guys?
    The top one is drawn by me.
    The bottom one was drawn by me a long time ago.
    Don't crit anythign about the bottom one, because I wouldn't draw anything near that bad any more.
    Thanks? e_e
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    Post by NKDZ Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:07 am

    Oops sorry, because usually people do old THEN new because it shows the wondrous effects of transformation ya know? But then again since your title is "new/old" it would make sense to put your new one first but yeah~ You know, misconceptions are misconceptions xD

    Right then, now to the critique. Your colouring and tone are really good as far as I can tell but you need more detail on the hair to make it look more like hair. Another thing is the fact that the right arm mysteriously turns invisible halfway through. If you don't feel like completing it or maybe don't know how to continue, it's best to just crop off the whole side rather than leave the decapitated arm there. The head looks a touch too big compared to the shoulders as the head should be half the chest give or take. You also need to add a few minor details that can change the whole (well I guess...) look of the picture such as the bone collar and such. Other than that, as I said, it's a massive improvement :D
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:15 am

    Thanks lol. <3
    Seriously the bottom one you really thought.. god you guys can be dumber than me ;___;
    Yeah I was too lazy to sort out the arm and spent like 20minutes on the hair no exaggeration there. Hair is my weak point. It turned out awful and I really need more practice on hair seriously. x:
    I'd have another go at it right now but I have to write homework on like the death penalty in for tomorrow so yup.
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    Post by NKDZ Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:20 am

    We're not dumb...Just gullible as hell.
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:21 am

    Lol alright.
    I've been nicknamed riri longer than you guys think. o-o
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    Post by NKDZ Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:29 am

    But I think you've been named riri long before you were born :O Does that mean...no...IT CAN'T BE!
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:13 am

    Nahh it's a nickname my friend came up with like a year ago.
    My real name's Eva. o-o
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    Post by Castle Sun Sep 25, 2011 8:28 am

    Well Riri, I like your work. As always.. xD
    I'll be be a fan of your art for-Eva. :3
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Sun Sep 25, 2011 9:08 am

    that's not how you pronounce it.
    heh.
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    Post by Xin Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:34 pm

    More like:

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    Post by Castle Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:14 pm

    FOEEEEEEEEVUH. Then.
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    Post by Xin Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:37 pm

    OOOOOH SHIT I THOUGHT THE FIRST PICTURE WAS THE OLD ONE :P!
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    Post by PsychoxLetter Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:38 pm

    XinWarrior wrote:More like:

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    Yeah that's right. x)
    and loool.

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